So I finally worked out the last sketch I had posted. I am fairly happy with the result and I really start to get in to shape again when it comes to drawing. The changes that were made are more detail and I did shorten the neck a bit. This time I did everything in Sketchable because of the simple nature of the app and I found out how to lock the layers transparency. This way it was fairly easy to get rid of the black outlines and give the lines colour to soften everything a bit.
I am going to translate this concept into 3d. It’s gonna be a real challenge since 2d is far more forgiving then when working in the third dimension, but since I have a better feel for the shapes it should be easier then in the past.